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I paint my fingerprints red,
for courage; panics coalesce,
and regret stains my handshake.
...I'm not sure how I feel about this title. (What else is new, right?)


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wdnest Oct 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Wonderful works. I read a few of your works, it is stunning. Keep it up. 
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haphazardmelody Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :blush: That means a lot to me.
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fernknits Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the poem!  I'm not sure about the title either...
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haphazardmelody Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! And yeah. I'm back and forth about this title every twenty minutes or so lol, so for now I'm just going to leave it alone. I hope in a week or so I'll have it settled in my mind one way or another.
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fernknits Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll be interested to see what you decide on!
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haphazardmelody Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(Me too. :P)
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tubefed Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the title. :) It makes me think of withdrawing fingers...that seems appropriate. 
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haphazardmelody Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's kind of what I was thinking too...while I feel like there could be a better title, this one does fit, so I may keep it anyway. I'm glad you liked it. :) I'm always afraid everyone else will hate my titles as much as I do lol.

And thank you so much for the favorite! :heart:
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tubefed Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Ah, don't hate your titles! (But, I admit, I get really, really jealous of people who can come up with beautiful titles. ;-;)
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haphazardmelody Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know right?! Insanely jealous.
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