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Your thoughts are sullied and torn -
I hear them whisper from your ears,
torturing you with truths you would
rather forget. We do not speak of this
often, but tonight is different. Tonight,

the moon is full, and the clouds
weep the syllables of your name. Tonight,
the air is thick with hunger, and nourishment
zests from your veins. Tonight...tonight,

the doves sing wretched melodies through
misplaced strands of your hair. As your words
give way to impasse, the grass stills beneath
your trembled fists. I kneel beside you
on broken branches, trying to remember

the cadence of your favorite star. But I think
we have both forgotten.
Sometimes...there is nowhere left to go.


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LeafoftheSoul Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
That is beautiful.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 trying to remember

the cadence of your favorite star. 

and the clouds
weep the syllables of your name

Amazing

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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Those were my favorite lines also. :heart: Thank you so much - I'm really glad you enjoyed this. It's always great to know that what you've done touched someone else.
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