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And the sun crackles
the horizon into dust
while the moon glides
slyly forward to
taste the faded daylight.
:iconglory-be-project:

But sunset is beautiful too.


Edit 12/5/13: Switched the words "slyly" and "glides." I like this a lot better. Sounds more...elegant to me, if you will.
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So welcome
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just beautiful imagery.
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :heart: I'm always a sucker for imagery.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: And you do it so well!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013   Writer
Oh, love - that's so beautiful; that last line truly ties it in so wonderfully :clap: :heart:
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I am a sucker for pretty imagery. :giggle:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   Writer
Haha, so am I!
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Exnihilo-nihil Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Great!
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully done, once again. :iconclapplz:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you. :heart: And thank you for the favorite. (Within...20 seconds of posting...I am never that on top of my inbox lol.)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

My pleasure. :heart:

(LOL, just a coincidence that I'm checking it and you're posting. :lmao:)

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