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intro
whatever we ask of you
you do the opposite
and i have to wonder
how you learned that

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sculpt my veins blue
to match the shades of june
scenting my pockets

sculpt my scalloped lungs small
with the bubbled edges
of ungraceful acrobat wings

sculpt my surfacescalloped mind empty
in reflection of the slate
filing together in alphabet strands

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epilogue
i do not know you yet
but i know you have my ears
and his stubborn posture
Sculpture
Growing a human is a very unique experience.

Please tell me what you think and give me all of your critical feedback! You are all wonderful. :heart: (And please tell me what you think of the title? I hate titles.)
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Earth opens
and shuts
with the sun,

but your eyes
are always closed.
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What? She's posting something? :XD:

I kind of liked this, although I have yet to come up with a title for it. Suggestions?

I can't ask for a critique, but please do let me know your critical thoughts! :) Suggestions always welcome.
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T Minus 3 Months(ish) to Baby!

Mon Mar 16, 2015, 9:28 AM


Life's been a bit crazy the past couple of weeks again, so I know I did that thing where I dropped off the face of the earth again. My sister-in-law threw a lovely baby shower for me, but my house was the best place to host it, so getting my house clean enough for 20+ people to be at it was...a bit of a project. Plus the whole 6 months pregnant thing made any progress I made a bit slow lol. I get tired a lot faster than I'm used to when I try to do anything. :grump: But it was fun! And we got lots of awesome stuff! And really only a few duplicates, so that's awesome.

I think things will settle down a bit for me for the next week or two, so I plan on another dA binge in which I try to get caught up on what ya'll have been up to. I know I said I was going to wipe my inbox clean, but I just can't do it. So I've been slowly but surely trying to get caught up (except for that 2 week break I took, of course).

For now, though, Vicky out.

How have you all been? :heart:

dragon: Elevit-Stock, mountains: fantom89, wastelands: resurgere | wroth, chains: ocd1c-stock, scroll: sxc.hu | ba1969, brushes: redheadstock & MouritsaDA-Stock; coding and graphics by kuschelirmel-stock
  • Mood: Happy
  • Reading: The Grapes of Wrath
  • Eating: Pasta
  • Drinking: Milk
Your throat
tightens
to a
nail;

syllables
stutter
over
white-ash
teeth;

rust
pirouettes.
Rust
So I've been ridiculously sick for about a week. My sore throat (which is finally improving) inspired this the other day.

Questions!
-What do you think of the line breaks?
-What do you think of the imagery?
-Do the last two lines make sense?
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Melancholy sighs your frame.

Melancholy whispers your hair withered.

Melancholy polishes your cheeks pale,
melancholy divides your tear ducts empty.

Melancholy strokes,
melancholy seduces,
melancholy solidifies,
melancholy aches,

aches your bones with a soothing lullaby.
Comfort
I feel like there's a lot of sadness here lately. Please don't forget to love yourself. You're important. :heart:

(Please tell me if you like the title? I've honestly spent over a day agonizing over what would work best.)
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United States
Current Residence: Illinois
Operating System: Windows XP
Personal Quote: "A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages." ~Tennesee Williams
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T Minus 3 Months(ish) to Baby!

Mon Mar 16, 2015, 9:28 AM


Life's been a bit crazy the past couple of weeks again, so I know I did that thing where I dropped off the face of the earth again. My sister-in-law threw a lovely baby shower for me, but my house was the best place to host it, so getting my house clean enough for 20+ people to be at it was...a bit of a project. Plus the whole 6 months pregnant thing made any progress I made a bit slow lol. I get tired a lot faster than I'm used to when I try to do anything. :grump: But it was fun! And we got lots of awesome stuff! And really only a few duplicates, so that's awesome.

I think things will settle down a bit for me for the next week or two, so I plan on another dA binge in which I try to get caught up on what ya'll have been up to. I know I said I was going to wipe my inbox clean, but I just can't do it. So I've been slowly but surely trying to get caught up (except for that 2 week break I took, of course).

For now, though, Vicky out.

How have you all been? :heart:

dragon: Elevit-Stock, mountains: fantom89, wastelands: resurgere | wroth, chains: ocd1c-stock, scroll: sxc.hu | ba1969, brushes: redheadstock & MouritsaDA-Stock; coding and graphics by kuschelirmel-stock
  • Mood: Happy
  • Reading: The Grapes of Wrath
  • Eating: Pasta
  • Drinking: Milk

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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Thanks for the fave :}
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I just wanted to thank you for all the sweet comments. I wasn't able to respond to them all but know that they warmed my heart :love: Thanks again.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! I was happy to get caught up on what you've been up to. :)
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the favorite! c: 
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for writing such lovely words!
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp: 
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the :+fav: on "Throwback Thursday," Vicky. :huggle:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
Thank you for the fave :love:
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