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Your throat
tightens
to a
nail;

syllables
stutter
over
white-ash
teeth;

rust
pirouettes.
Rust
So I've been ridiculously sick for about a week. My sore throat (which is finally improving) inspired this the other day.

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Melancholy sighs your frame.

Melancholy whispers your hair withered.

Melancholy polishes your cheeks pale,
melancholy divides your tear ducts empty.

Melancholy strokes,
melancholy seduces,
melancholy solidifies,
melancholy aches,

aches your bones with a soothing lullaby.
Comfort
I feel like there's a lot of sadness here lately. Please don't forget to love yourself. You're important. :heart:

(Please tell me if you like the title? I've honestly spent over a day agonizing over what would work best.)
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Tue Feb 10, 2015, 2:28 PM


You guys.

I'm kind of the worst.

I've fallen ridiculously behind. I wanted to respond to all the comments...but I cannot possibly...respond to all the favorites. I've never just deleted them all before, and I'm basically feeling like a hideous human being for doing so.

I APPRECIATE ALL OF YOU AND YOUR BEAUTIFUL FAVORITES ON MY WORK! The support means so much to me.

I'm sorry. I'll never get caught up unless I start with a clean slate.

I may even have to wipe the inbox. Which I've also never done. :( There's just so much awesome...and I don't have enough time to get caught up....sad.

Please send me thumbs of the things you're most proud of recently? I don't want to miss anything, even though I'm going to. :/ Send me the awesome stuff you've done since October....please.

Edit!:
And hello to all my new watchers! I'm so honored! :) Even though I can't thank all of you individually, please do know how very much I appreciate it. Let's be friends, okay? :heart:

dragon: Elevit-Stock, mountains: fantom89, wastelands: resurgere | wroth, chains: ocd1c-stock, scroll: sxc.hu | ba1969, brushes: redheadstock & MouritsaDA-Stock; coding and graphics by kuschelirmel-stock
  • Mood: Defeated
  • Reading: The Grapes of Wrath
  • Eating: Egg Roll
  • Drinking: Milk
I am patchworking
your gossamer wings
back to blood and glass,

while you scrape palms
to lungs that choke
against a splinter cage.

The world keeps breathing
without you, and you
shut your eyes tightly
because it makes you dizzy.

Dizzy is how your legs
trip down the asphalt;
dizzy is how your eyes
drown to sleep; dizzy
is how your chest

spirals misery
through your limbs. I am
patchworking your gossamer wings
back to blood and glass,

but silk always tears.
Patchwork Wings
I love you more than I might ever tell you. :heart: You'll get through it.


:iconglory-be-project: Getting close to the end of the year! We're getting there!


Edit 2/10/15: I'm trying to finally get caught up on all things dA, but I was rereading this and saw a couple things to change. So I changed them.
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Current Residence: Illinois
Operating System: Windows XP
Personal Quote: "A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages." ~Tennesee Williams
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Tue Feb 10, 2015, 2:28 PM


You guys.

I'm kind of the worst.

I've fallen ridiculously behind. I wanted to respond to all the comments...but I cannot possibly...respond to all the favorites. I've never just deleted them all before, and I'm basically feeling like a hideous human being for doing so.

I APPRECIATE ALL OF YOU AND YOUR BEAUTIFUL FAVORITES ON MY WORK! The support means so much to me.

I'm sorry. I'll never get caught up unless I start with a clean slate.

I may even have to wipe the inbox. Which I've also never done. :( There's just so much awesome...and I don't have enough time to get caught up....sad.

Please send me thumbs of the things you're most proud of recently? I don't want to miss anything, even though I'm going to. :/ Send me the awesome stuff you've done since October....please.

Edit!:
And hello to all my new watchers! I'm so honored! :) Even though I can't thank all of you individually, please do know how very much I appreciate it. Let's be friends, okay? :heart:

dragon: Elevit-Stock, mountains: fantom89, wastelands: resurgere | wroth, chains: ocd1c-stock, scroll: sxc.hu | ba1969, brushes: redheadstock & MouritsaDA-Stock; coding and graphics by kuschelirmel-stock
  • Mood: Defeated
  • Reading: The Grapes of Wrath
  • Eating: Egg Roll
  • Drinking: Milk

Thank you!







Belated Happy Valentine\'s Day! 

38%
3 deviants said But I still love you guys! :heart:
25%
2 deviants said I got so many wonderful Valentines in my inbox!
25%
2 deviants said :iconpandaplz:
13%
1 deviant said And then I was a bum and didn't send any of my own.
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No deviants said So please have a panda:

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Wordeea Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
thank you !!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! :)
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Vicky, thanks for the :+favlove: on "Ash," "Infinity," and "Ways to Bare Your Soul." :love: Also, I see you on Skyyyype. :P
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
You are silllllllllllllly.
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I knooooww. :squee:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015   Writer
Hey, thank you so much for the comments! I'm sorry I took so long to reply to them. :heart:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
No worries! I'm the queen of late late replies lately. :P
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're seriously wonderful. Thank you so, so much. :heart: 
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're pretty wonderful yourself. :)
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:heart: 
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